Wednesday 10 February 2016

The Men Black Part 1 :)


Tears trickled to the hard ground as her parents leave for a holiday. She hopes that they will see them soon. As soon as her Mum and Dad are out of sight the argument between Kieran and Kayley starts. A car pulls up then Chloe and Emma get out.  Yay they get to stay with me while they are gone when the fighting stops Kieran and Kayley turn around and says “We wish you three were not here and would not come back.” Larine, Chloe and Emma were surprised because they never sound like that it must mean that they are under control but they did not know.

The next day Larine, Chloe and Emma saw the postman so they went out to get the mail.  When they got there Larine pointed out the that she saw a man in black and he was pointing to them. So Chloe said “What do you want”? and the man in black said  “We need you” then Emma speaks up “What do you mean We?” “Ahh you may want to look around” Chloe whispers. oh no they are in big trouble the for next thing they knew it they falled into a deep sleep and was taken somewhere weird and scary.

As Larine wakes up the sea water splashed on her and dolphins call to each other the the boat stops what had happened? Was this really true? she looks around the boat and finds out that she was beside Emma and Chloe they had just woken up did they think the same thing as her? but now wasn't the time to ask  someone was coming the next sound she heard was a voice she did not know “Take them to shore and keep them there” “ok” was the strange reply she tried to yell out help but something stopped her “Ahh you try to say help but you can’t nobody will hear you” was that a voice in the distant or was she imagining things? she did not know. “shall we put them to sleep  cause they might struggle sir” “ yes do that you are right” the man snarled evilly in agreement.


Hisss “What was the-? {falls in a deep sleep} bright sunlight shone over them the first thing they heard was Emma scream “why did you scream Emma” Larine and Chloe says angrily “ I S-S-S saw a man and was skin and bones walking around the island” she says shakily “ Aren’t you sure that this is a torture cam- {A girl walks up} “Oh hello you must be new my name is Anne do you mind if you call me anne with an ‘e’ I used to be called Anne of water valley but got put here oh I nearly forgot what's your name” “ My name is Chloe this is Larine and this is Emma. sorry I thought you were coming to kill us” “Oh its okay I always hear that” “Oh good what is this place?” “It's a place  where magical people gets put so they can’t  harm the world but that's what I heard anyway it might be something else. And Larine was taken back home for some reason and now in the car or was she......

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