The man in black part 2:)

The man in black part 2:)

this is the same as the FIST EVER MEN IN BLACK PART 1! (this is the second part of it)

“you should of followed them” says larine angrily. “ I tried but big arms took me away and told me my new name” “ Really it is what happened anyway, I don’t know what happened to them” “who's that?” asks Roman “She's Chloe” says larine. “Really? she doesn't look like her wait let me guess she's been here ages?” “Your right Roman she's been here for ages” so now that they were united they talked over what they should do finally Chloe piped up “Emma we need to find Emma And Anne because they were taken to find out the truth and were kidnaped and I was to become a slave and that's how I look really fragile I think I know where it is but you will have to act like my new prisoners okay?” “Ok” replied the others.

When they saw the entrance they started to tremble but Chloe did not tremble she walked towards the desk and said these names: Lucy (Larine) Max (Chase) Blue (Roman) and Bunny (Sharmila) “Those are unusual names Miss Heidi” said the man at the desk “I do not know there names  they refused to say” “okay I will threaten them to say them names What's your name boy?” (He points to roman) “My name is Blue” “how about you?” (points to Larine) “My name is lucy” “What about you?” (points to chase) “My name is Max” “And mine is bunny” “Ahh so you talk but not any more go with heidi and she will take you to the cage you will be put in.”

So Chloe known as Heidi took them to where lay the poor girls called emma and Anne and left them there and hid the key but when she was about to go out she was grabbed she tried to scream but a hand covered  her mouth and whispered in her ear and said “shh look if you follow me without a sound you won’t get gagged and get put in a sack” but Chloe would not agree so he gave her a hit in the head and gagged and put her in a sack and ran off.

A dark room full of old musty toys a light turns on and Chloe saw the man looking at her “who are you?” she says “Me? I am the leader of this place and now you need to find out why you and your friends are here for I know you have heard the rumors about this place and the truth is that some that we bring here are magic and we intend to find all of them and do something to them but you and your friends are different go and get them all of them they will understand what you need to do bring them to me and I will find out what you curse you have.

As they find out that she has gone they knew they were trapped “What should we do?” cried out Larine “Do not be afraid it's me Heidi” “What Chloe?” “Yes you have to follow me now” “To where? “to the leader of this place I have signed you all out for the same reason now follow me” when they got there he knew at once that they were the most powerful people ever. He was making a trap

The men in black part 1

this is a remix of what happened

The Man In Black Part 1 :)  

We are in the car on our way to Nans,Kayley is crying and kieran is trying to make Mum and Dad stay. Tears dribbled down my face as the orange car speeds out of site. As I slowly shuffle inside I just want to go to bed. My head hurts and I have tears as big as boulders. I have been lying in bed for quite a while now and I still don't know what to do. That's it I need to have a friend over. I rush for the phone. Yes Maddy answered it and now she is coming over. As I rush outside I was just in time to see a shadow lerk a way behind the big old tree.

Finally Maddy turns up and we a have a talk about what I saw. Latter on We feel like a swim so we invite Roman and Chace over. We were having a lot of fun until the air filled with green smoke. Knockout gas. Get in the pool I yell to the others but it was too late we were all floating on top of the water.  As Chace and Roman wake up they feel water splash on the cheeks. Larnie screams an echoey voice. Sharmila I scream I haven't seen you in well like forever. Come on we have got to get out of here said Sharmila . Wo wo wo said Roman. Who are you?. Oh I am Sharmila. Quick they're awake booms a rough voice. I told you so. Come on we have to  Hurry!!!.

Now we are running for our lives with men in black suits running after us and… they are armed with guns. Oh no what's that on the beach near the blackberry bush. It look like Roman has spotted it too I think it's a person because Roman has just pick it up and is running with it above his head. She looks so weak oh look she's pointing at something it looks like a door that is camouflaged in with the bush. Roman ran into the bush and the others followed. It was like a little hidey hole. Where did they go? said a deep voice?. Find them.

We were in that hole for two days and eight hours. Yes the girl (Chloe) had woken up and we were planning our escape. Chloe (the girl Roman saved) was helping us to. She said that there was a trap door somewhere. We looked high and low but we could not find the trapdoor. suddenly we found it well we didn't but some people came out of it. Oh no it's the men in black well at least they haven't got guns this time. But they have worse bombs!!. Run yells Sharmila to Roman,Chloe,Chase and me. We made it to the trap door just in time. Because the bomb went off as soon as Chace got outside.

As I look around to see where we are I remember Maddy we left her somewhere. As all the others panic I hear the slightest sound of a girl crying. I walk around the corner and I see Maddy. Maddy I yell. Larnie Yells Maddy. Where have you been I say in a worried tone. Oh I have been following you guys and when you walked into the blackberry bush I thought that you had some of that green gas still in you so I freaked out and started to cry. Then I felt big arms grab me and I got put into the cage with the bombs and I got dropped here with you.

      

The Men Black Part 1 :)

Tears trickled to the hard ground as her parents leave for a holiday. She hopes that they will see them soon. As soon as her Mum and Dad are out of sight the argument between Kieran and Kayley starts. A car pulls up then Chloe and Emma get out.  Yay they get to stay with me while they are gone when the fighting stops Kieran and Kayley turn around and says “We wish you three were not here and would not come back.” Larine, Chloe and Emma were surprised because they never sound like that it must mean that they are under control but they did not know.

The next day Larine, Chloe and Emma saw the postman so they went out to get the mail.  When they got there Larine pointed out the that she saw a man in black and he was pointing to them. So Chloe said “What do you want”? and the man in black said  “We need you” then Emma speaks up “What do you mean We?” “Ahh you may want to look around” Chloe whispers. oh no they are in big trouble the for next thing they knew it they falled into a deep sleep and was taken somewhere weird and scary.

As Larine wakes up the sea water splashed on her and dolphins call to each other the the boat stops what had happened? Was this really true? she looks around the boat and finds out that she was beside Emma and Chloe they had just woken up did they think the same thing as her? but now wasn't the time to ask  someone was coming the next sound she heard was a voice she did not know “Take them to shore and keep them there” “ok” was the strange reply she tried to yell out help but something stopped her “Ahh you try to say help but you can’t nobody will hear you” was that a voice in the distant or was she imagining things? she did not know. “shall we put them to sleep  cause they might struggle sir” “ yes do that you are right” the man snarled evilly in agreement.

Hisss “What was the-? {falls in a deep sleep} bright sunlight shone over them the first thing they heard was Emma scream “why did you scream Emma” Larine and Chloe says angrily “ I S-S-S saw a man and was skin and bones walking around the island” she says shakily “ Aren’t you sure that this is a torture cam- {A girl walks up} “Oh hello you must be new my name is Anne do you mind if you call me anne with an ‘e’ I used to be called Anne of water valley but got put here oh I nearly forgot what's your name” “ My name is Chloe this is Larine and this is Emma. sorry I thought you were coming to kill us” “Oh its okay I always hear that” “Oh good what is this place?” “It's a place  where magical people gets put so they can’t  harm the world but that's what I heard anyway it might be something else. And Larine was taken back home for some reason and now in the car or was she......

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The escape part 7

But they ate it all the same. a few weeks later Bluebell was running into the room she and Athena sheared and said “I have found an escape place the man was really dumb and put it beside one of my work space!” “we will escape tonight” Athena whispered. it was now night and the two girls were sneaking out side “There it is” bluebell says so they opened the door and slipped through.

Bright sunlight hit their eyes but soon they got used to the light. “we can go home now!” they say in union then they looked at each other and then at themselves they looked like twins, they had one auburn ponytail with eyes like the sea only Athena had  wild sea eyes and bluebell had calm sea eyes. their clothes was the same pinafore they wore in the other place and they had very few freckles.

before they could say anything a man came behind them and said “let me escort you home young ladies” they said yes so soon the man was driving them home “here you go!” he says smiling as he sees them walk into the trap before they could run back he turned on his car and raced off…

The escape part 6

soon they had finished the first chore and it was only 10:00 so they walked back to their room but when they were about 10 meters away Eddie came and talked to them “well done the trophy room is the tidiest it has ever been can you now do the 100,50,0000 beds now? thank you” and with that he walked off.

“This will take us forever!” they cried when he left but they got straight to it 2 hours later they had done 50,25,0000 “only 50,25,0000 left” whispered Bluebell so they continued 5 hours later all the beds were done well it was what they thought ‘DONG!’ “could Athena and bluebell please do 100 more beds!” says the same girl voice.

“let’s go” they say to each other. 4 hours later all 100 beds were done and it was 8:00  ‘DONG’ “Tea time go to your rooms!” the voice yelled ‘DONG’ in came tea frog eyes and frog in the hole and for the drink was waste water cleaned. “YUCK!” they say.

the escape part 5

“WAKE UP” cried a urgent whisper “look over there” says bluebell “WHAT!” Athena screams “he meant us the whole time!” she said almost in tears. “Ahh I See you have seen the time table yes?” says Eddie “Yes” they yell. Eddie took one look at them and said: “YOU two need a makeover! don’t worry you will be like a slave by tomorrow! but now you will have these old one frocks for today.

the girls nodded and took one more look at the time table

What you are doing:	Time:
dusting in trophy room	After breakfast about 9:30am
beds (all 100,50,0000 of them)	11:00am
lights out	after tea about 9:00pm

 “Great” bluebell groaned “this is gonna be a long day” ‘DONG” “breakfast time!” yelled a girl voice. and in came a waiter with their food and lots more for more people? “DOING” “Chores time” yelled a voice.

Bluebell and Athena hurried to the trophy room and opened the door “wow! this is really dusty this will take forever!” exclaimed Athena they looked around and found a duster and started chatting “ do you what breakfast was?” Athena says “of course” bluebells says “well breakfast was frog slime for our drink and stale frogs legs, stale frogs body too” Athena says pretending to spew up.

the escape part 4

As the girl girls were flying towards the exit a man was eager to see the two children that were coming to him. “Are you sure this is the place?” Athena asked unsure. “Yes!” Bluebell says excitedly she was to be free at last. so the two girls stepped into  the place they saw right at the end was the way out or was it?? “Race you to the door!” Athena yells back to her. soon they were standing in front of the door, it creaked open and they slipped through and what they came to was a sort of place where you would call home.

“wow!” they gasped then a man appeared behind them

:want a room follow me” he says “who are you?” they say in unison “ha twins” he says “anyway I am Eddie. and I own this place. AHH this is you room” Eddie says they look it was the most amazing place ever with soft things, cuddly things, warm things, and more things!

“Tomorrow we will set off mister.” Says Bluebell “oh that will not be necessary, because my little slaves will be working…  “ he says and with that he shut and door and locked it and bam! and the room became an old and miserable room.  the girls thought he was joking so they went to sleep.

The escape part 3

One day Bluebell and Athena were talking about where they came from “I lived as the most popular girl in my town” says bluebell (she is the same size as Athena) “I was the most popular girl in my town” says Athena that sent them into a laughing stock. Then suddenly out of nowhere wings appeared on Athena’s back and someone talked to her “you are now one of us…” the voice hissed. soon Bluebell percked up a tiny bit more than usual “Athena since you have wings we can escape”

“Come this way” Bluebell says 10 minutes later Bluebell and Athena came to a clearing and there was a row of wild plants “what are those?” Athena asks “those are wild plumdrops.” Bluebell says with excitement “what you do is land on the ground and bite it whole. watch” before Athena could stop her Bluebell bit the plumdrop whole and poff

Bluebell was chucked up in the air and she landed on the ground with more energy than ever.

“try” Bluebell says before Athena could stop herself her hand darted out and picked a plumdrop and put it in her mouth whole poof! the same thing happened to her. “look! look! over there that is where we need to go to get out of here let's go!” says Bluebell

The escape part 2

“aww so cute” Rhys whispers as Athena stomps in after him “I don’t care” Athena says a little too loudly. “SHHH! you will scare them” says Rhys “OK BOSSY-PANTS!” yells Athena and sits on the couch beside her and starts to read. She did not hear anything happening around her. she did not even notice the strong wind that was silently drifting towards her…

“Athena. Athena.” whispers a soft voice “wake up” soon Athena was wide awake “where am I? how did I get here?” she said “Come on Athena you know me I am you mum” laughed the strange woman Athena was not convinced “FINE I am Mrs french call me Frenchie for short” says Mrs French “OK Mrs French” says Athena.  

It had been two days and frenchie had told Athena that she would never return to her family so she was to live here and keep her company. Soon Athena found out about the fairies and had made one particular friend bluebell.

The escape part 1

Athena got out her last book she needed to read. Her mum had said she could get new ones she had soon finished that book.. “MUM!” she called. “I have finished reading all my books!” her mum came into the room and said “Athena there is one more book on your bookshelf” Athena sighed. One more book to read. When she got it off the shelf she noticed that it was an old book. Athena hates old books because she thought that old books were out of fashion.

She groaned. It was so she could get NEW books. She sat down and opened it and started to read… after an hour she had got to the second chapter “ATHENA, RHYS! time to pick up something” yelled her Dad.  Athena stopped reading and gathered her things and put them into a bag as well as the old book.

“Are we there yet?” came a voice from the back “no” came the reply. it had been 1 hour, Rhys has been car sick so he had to sit in the back back by himself 50 minutes passed and they were parking up by a animal shop then her dad turned around and said: “you kids go buy anything you want since we are the richest in the world “SWEET!” yelled Rhys.

see part 2 soon!