The mystery of the missing girl

Hey guys this is a story that I have been working on for a while and I am still working on it I will update it regularly so you can read to find out for yourself what is happening

The mystery of the missing girl

underlined = main characters

character names:

Olivia

Scarlet

Dawn

Eve

Sunset

Alex

Jeffery

Alexander

Robbie (Reb)

Winston

A beautiful girl stands in the blazing sun her golden blonde hair flying around in the soft breeze. Smiling as she dances around happily she had been freed from a mean scary story book but that was a different story.  

“Come here my darling” a voice crocks from the deep, dark shadows  

“Where are you?” the girl asks sweetly no one replied

“oh” was all that she could muster.  She turned around because she thought she heard a noise but no one was there… ‘hmmm’ the girl thought hard

“who cares” she says to herself. Soft hands close over the girl's mouth before she could scream another person tied her arms and legs together and gagged so they did not have to hold her mouth. The girl searches everywhere looking for what she could use to escape but it was no use they had got her. Tears ran down her face she was going to be a captive of these strange people as she tries to get rid of the gag she made a noise

“mMmM-” “stop it!” a man's voice yelled “should  ..,.. put ..,.. out ..,.. on her” a young looking man grumbles and going so quiet that only the men could hear.  

“yes” says an cranky looking man “MmMmM!” she tries to stop them but she was as helpless as a fly stuck in a fly net her gag was untied and then they gave her a strange looking drink so she drank it and all of a sudden everything went black.

“We have to find her” Eve cries “she is my sister!” she continues,

“It’s okay, we will find her” olivia says her voice so calming she could probably have a sparrow calmed down and hop onto her.

“Where did we see her last?” asks scarlet,

“on the hill where you Eve, and your sister rise the moon and make it day” Says an incredibly handsome boy called Robbie but nick named Reb

“ahhh that place I love that place so claiming” says Alex walking into the room just the right moment

“Alex!” Olivia cries “you made it!”

“of course!” Alex says doing a cheesy grin olivia swatted him but still giggled, Robbie rolled his eyes

“I thought we were talking about Eve's sister!” a cute looking boy says all their heads turn his way

“WHO ARE YOU!?” Alexander demands

“me?” sneers the boy “I am Jeffery” he smiled a charming smile

“I saw her being kidnapped by some people but I do not know who they were, BUT I know that they wanted to get her and I suppose that they will want little Evie here” he says looking down at Eve.

“I AM NOT LITTLE LET ALONE EVIE!!! I AM EVE!!!” Eve shouts at him

“okay fine by me” Jeffery says.

“what happened?” whispered the girl she had just woken up “She's up” a man says

“Really? I just wanted to live my life since she's sleepin’ my” Why do I do this one” he gets a green glass and gives it to her and she drinks it all “why did you have to make me the one in charge of the GIRL” he says putting the gag back on “she is like the worst one, oh and what is her name anyway?” The man says finally stopping then he rips off the gag again and asks her in a very mean voice before she falls asleep “what is your name!!!?” he yelled at her,

“my name is Dawn” she whispered so quietly they could only just hear

“thank you” he says pleased that he got her to say her name.

All day the friends tried to figure out a plan so they could find her “I say” calls out Alexander

“I say that this is officially a mystery of the- no OUR missing girl”

“Your  right” Jeffrey laughs “well we better protect our Eve, or what will we do?” for once he was right so they welcomed him into the team.

“Right we need to figure out this mystery before it is too late who knows what those people will do to her” everyone agrees with Alex then everyone pauses looking at each other what were they going to do!

“so..” Scarlet whispers weakly just to break the awkward silence.

“Oh no!” someone cries

“Oh yes” said a rough looking man Dawn looks up and saw the same boy that had freed her from her trap in the story. she had not got his name last time

“I don’t want to do this” the boy cries rocking back on his heels

“WELL TELL HER YOU NAME” says the mean man

“FINE” he cries but quickly got rid of the tears.

“I am winston” the boy says “and I am going to tell you why w-no I mean YOU are here” he stammers quickly correcting himself

“Did you know” he started “That you have a third sister?” winston did not stop for her to talk

“and she is right here with us and soon we will get your last sister eve.” he tried to spit the last word out so he sounded like one of them. The man gave winston a look as if to say ‘come on RIP off the gag so she can blab all of her secrets to us. winston nodded and carefully took off the gag.

“WHAT DO YOU MEAN I HAVE A THIRD SISTER!?” she yelled at them, the man looked startled not clearly expecting that as an answer.

“I WILL YELL BUT NEVER TELL ANY OF MY SECRETS!” she continued the man started to look frightened can she really read people's minds he wondered?

“AND I KNOW WHAT YOU ARE THINKING YOU ARE THINKING THAT I CAN REALLY READ PEOPLE'S MIND!” she smiled triumphantly as he stumbled out of the room and him shouting  out behind him

“Hey Winston you can look after Dawn by yourself” his voice fading as he disappeared down the long corridor

“WOW” Winston was surprised.

It had been five weeks since Dawn had went missing and all of the teenagers had not come up with a single Idea

“what about we.. oh that won’t work” miserable as they were they helped eve with raising the sun and raising the moon. by supporting her so she could be strong enough. to keep going once more they had a meeting.

“This has gone too long!” sniffs Jeffrey “I really want to see what she looks like” he continues.   

“I can not think of anything” Cries Eve

“CALM DOwN EVE!” Everyone cries with fear.

“I am trying to” Sniffs Eve all of a sudden Robbie cried out

“I HAVE AN IDEA!!!”

“What is is?” Eve asks perking up if this one works she thought we would be happy again.

“Well come on! Spit it out” She says excitedly

“Ok so here's the plan…”

“A sister I have another sister!” Dawn had been going on for ages

“Will you cut it out!” pleads winston he continues “I have to now show you her” Wiston got up and grabbed some chains. Those chain were special These chains would drain out Dawns power and make her helpless and weak winston knew she needed her power to survive he looked for stuff he could use instead and saw some normal chains they looked the same good he thought and chained the normal chains onto her and hid the special chains He whispered to her his plan Dawn noded and walked along with him sometimes acting like she did not want to go

“COME ON” he yelled at her pretending to get mad at her but secretly not mad.

“We are here” he says he walked up to the door and unlocked it out came a pretty girl with the longest hair Dawn could ever imagine and the girl's hair was a beautiful auburn  colour.

“Wh-o are-e y-you” Dawn finally manages to whisper

“Me?” The girl laughs shakily “I am Sunset” than all of a sudden she collapsed

“What happened?” Dawn asks winston but winston was not there he strode to the master's office and asked if he could look after both the girls in the same room. The man was delighted and said yes.

All day Eve fretted over her sister “Is she dead!?” She would always say every hour or so.

Back where dawn was wiston came back and took both of the girls to where dawn’s prison cell was  

The man in black part 2:)

The man in black part 2:)

this is the same as the FIST EVER MEN IN BLACK PART 1! (this is the second part of it)

“you should of followed them” says larine angrily. “ I tried but big arms took me away and told me my new name” “ Really it is what happened anyway, I don’t know what happened to them” “who's that?” asks Roman “She's Chloe” says larine. “Really? she doesn't look like her wait let me guess she's been here ages?” “Your right Roman she's been here for ages” so now that they were united they talked over what they should do finally Chloe piped up “Emma we need to find Emma And Anne because they were taken to find out the truth and were kidnaped and I was to become a slave and that's how I look really fragile I think I know where it is but you will have to act like my new prisoners okay?” “Ok” replied the others.

When they saw the entrance they started to tremble but Chloe did not tremble she walked towards the desk and said these names: Lucy (Larine) Max (Chase) Blue (Roman) and Bunny (Sharmila) “Those are unusual names Miss Heidi” said the man at the desk “I do not know there names  they refused to say” “okay I will threaten them to say them names What's your name boy?” (He points to roman) “My name is Blue” “how about you?” (points to Larine) “My name is lucy” “What about you?” (points to chase) “My name is Max” “And mine is bunny” “Ahh so you talk but not any more go with heidi and she will take you to the cage you will be put in.”

So Chloe known as Heidi took them to where lay the poor girls called emma and Anne and left them there and hid the key but when she was about to go out she was grabbed she tried to scream but a hand covered  her mouth and whispered in her ear and said “shh look if you follow me without a sound you won’t get gagged and get put in a sack” but Chloe would not agree so he gave her a hit in the head and gagged and put her in a sack and ran off.

A dark room full of old musty toys a light turns on and Chloe saw the man looking at her “who are you?” she says “Me? I am the leader of this place and now you need to find out why you and your friends are here for I know you have heard the rumors about this place and the truth is that some that we bring here are magic and we intend to find all of them and do something to them but you and your friends are different go and get them all of them they will understand what you need to do bring them to me and I will find out what you curse you have.

As they find out that she has gone they knew they were trapped “What should we do?” cried out Larine “Do not be afraid it's me Heidi” “What Chloe?” “Yes you have to follow me now” “To where? “to the leader of this place I have signed you all out for the same reason now follow me” when they got there he knew at once that they were the most powerful people ever. He was making a trap

The men in black part 1

this is a remix of what happened

The Man In Black Part 1 :)  

We are in the car on our way to Nans,Kayley is crying and kieran is trying to make Mum and Dad stay. Tears dribbled down my face as the orange car speeds out of site. As I slowly shuffle inside I just want to go to bed. My head hurts and I have tears as big as boulders. I have been lying in bed for quite a while now and I still don't know what to do. That's it I need to have a friend over. I rush for the phone. Yes Maddy answered it and now she is coming over. As I rush outside I was just in time to see a shadow lerk a way behind the big old tree.

Finally Maddy turns up and we a have a talk about what I saw. Latter on We feel like a swim so we invite Roman and Chace over. We were having a lot of fun until the air filled with green smoke. Knockout gas. Get in the pool I yell to the others but it was too late we were all floating on top of the water.  As Chace and Roman wake up they feel water splash on the cheeks. Larnie screams an echoey voice. Sharmila I scream I haven't seen you in well like forever. Come on we have got to get out of here said Sharmila . Wo wo wo said Roman. Who are you?. Oh I am Sharmila. Quick they're awake booms a rough voice. I told you so. Come on we have to  Hurry!!!.

Now we are running for our lives with men in black suits running after us and… they are armed with guns. Oh no what's that on the beach near the blackberry bush. It look like Roman has spotted it too I think it's a person because Roman has just pick it up and is running with it above his head. She looks so weak oh look she's pointing at something it looks like a door that is camouflaged in with the bush. Roman ran into the bush and the others followed. It was like a little hidey hole. Where did they go? said a deep voice?. Find them.

We were in that hole for two days and eight hours. Yes the girl (Chloe) had woken up and we were planning our escape. Chloe (the girl Roman saved) was helping us to. She said that there was a trap door somewhere. We looked high and low but we could not find the trapdoor. suddenly we found it well we didn't but some people came out of it. Oh no it's the men in black well at least they haven't got guns this time. But they have worse bombs!!. Run yells Sharmila to Roman,Chloe,Chase and me. We made it to the trap door just in time. Because the bomb went off as soon as Chace got outside.

As I look around to see where we are I remember Maddy we left her somewhere. As all the others panic I hear the slightest sound of a girl crying. I walk around the corner and I see Maddy. Maddy I yell. Larnie Yells Maddy. Where have you been I say in a worried tone. Oh I have been following you guys and when you walked into the blackberry bush I thought that you had some of that green gas still in you so I freaked out and started to cry. Then I felt big arms grab me and I got put into the cage with the bombs and I got dropped here with you.

      

The Men Black Part 1 :)

Tears trickled to the hard ground as her parents leave for a holiday. She hopes that they will see them soon. As soon as her Mum and Dad are out of sight the argument between Kieran and Kayley starts. A car pulls up then Chloe and Emma get out.  Yay they get to stay with me while they are gone when the fighting stops Kieran and Kayley turn around and says “We wish you three were not here and would not come back.” Larine, Chloe and Emma were surprised because they never sound like that it must mean that they are under control but they did not know.

The next day Larine, Chloe and Emma saw the postman so they went out to get the mail.  When they got there Larine pointed out the that she saw a man in black and he was pointing to them. So Chloe said “What do you want”? and the man in black said  “We need you” then Emma speaks up “What do you mean We?” “Ahh you may want to look around” Chloe whispers. oh no they are in big trouble the for next thing they knew it they falled into a deep sleep and was taken somewhere weird and scary.

As Larine wakes up the sea water splashed on her and dolphins call to each other the the boat stops what had happened? Was this really true? she looks around the boat and finds out that she was beside Emma and Chloe they had just woken up did they think the same thing as her? but now wasn't the time to ask  someone was coming the next sound she heard was a voice she did not know “Take them to shore and keep them there” “ok” was the strange reply she tried to yell out help but something stopped her “Ahh you try to say help but you can’t nobody will hear you” was that a voice in the distant or was she imagining things? she did not know. “shall we put them to sleep  cause they might struggle sir” “ yes do that you are right” the man snarled evilly in agreement.

Hisss “What was the-? {falls in a deep sleep} bright sunlight shone over them the first thing they heard was Emma scream “why did you scream Emma” Larine and Chloe says angrily “ I S-S-S saw a man and was skin and bones walking around the island” she says shakily “ Aren’t you sure that this is a torture cam- {A girl walks up} “Oh hello you must be new my name is Anne do you mind if you call me anne with an ‘e’ I used to be called Anne of water valley but got put here oh I nearly forgot what's your name” “ My name is Chloe this is Larine and this is Emma. sorry I thought you were coming to kill us” “Oh its okay I always hear that” “Oh good what is this place?” “It's a place  where magical people gets put so they can’t  harm the world but that's what I heard anyway it might be something else. And Larine was taken back home for some reason and now in the car or was she......

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The escape part 7

But they ate it all the same. a few weeks later Bluebell was running into the room she and Athena sheared and said “I have found an escape place the man was really dumb and put it beside one of my work space!” “we will escape tonight” Athena whispered. it was now night and the two girls were sneaking out side “There it is” bluebell says so they opened the door and slipped through.

Bright sunlight hit their eyes but soon they got used to the light. “we can go home now!” they say in union then they looked at each other and then at themselves they looked like twins, they had one auburn ponytail with eyes like the sea only Athena had  wild sea eyes and bluebell had calm sea eyes. their clothes was the same pinafore they wore in the other place and they had very few freckles.

before they could say anything a man came behind them and said “let me escort you home young ladies” they said yes so soon the man was driving them home “here you go!” he says smiling as he sees them walk into the trap before they could run back he turned on his car and raced off…

The escape part 6

soon they had finished the first chore and it was only 10:00 so they walked back to their room but when they were about 10 meters away Eddie came and talked to them “well done the trophy room is the tidiest it has ever been can you now do the 100,50,0000 beds now? thank you” and with that he walked off.

“This will take us forever!” they cried when he left but they got straight to it 2 hours later they had done 50,25,0000 “only 50,25,0000 left” whispered Bluebell so they continued 5 hours later all the beds were done well it was what they thought ‘DONG!’ “could Athena and bluebell please do 100 more beds!” says the same girl voice.

“let’s go” they say to each other. 4 hours later all 100 beds were done and it was 8:00  ‘DONG’ “Tea time go to your rooms!” the voice yelled ‘DONG’ in came tea frog eyes and frog in the hole and for the drink was waste water cleaned. “YUCK!” they say.