Wednesday 30 November 2016

A poem

So yeah... YOU THINK THAT I WRITE POEMS NOW!!!!! no.... (well yeah I do.. BUT FOR SCHOOL!)
I smell the unfinished dinner cooking away over a hot fire.
I taste the unexpected bland mince enter my unwilling mouth.
I feel the tiredness wash over me like a blanket.
I see the murky river overflowing with colourful kayaks.
I hear the continuous giggles of wide awake girls, will they ever stop?
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Monday 14 November 2016

The punishment girl update!

Sorry that I am not doing the update daily! I WILL TRY TO DO BETTER!!!!!!!!!!

The Punishment Girl.

As I stumble stumble down the musty corridor girls of all ages cower away from me; as if I was a disease! I sigh but walk on ‘what is it with me?’ I wonder ‘they all run away from me. it's not fair!’ I continue to think what is wrong with me? Who am i?’ I wonder for the onethousandout time, all my daydreaming was interrupted when I bumped into the ‘special’ who kept us in order (really!?)
“THERE YOU ARE!”, cried Keira “THE NUN WANTS TO SEE YOU!”, she shouts as if every one has to know. I stare into her bulging blue eyes
“FiNE”, I shout loudly but not too loud otherwise I will be in BiG trouble.

I turned and walked away but before I got that far I was grabbed and hauled towards the Nun…
“You’ll be wondering why I want to talk to you”, the Nun calmly says, “Well that is because you are the forbidden one!”, I looked up and saw her cool gaze turn into glee.
“BB-BUT I am right handed and M-M-My name is Violet!”, I cry not taking this all in.
“Lilac look around you, girls cower away from you, people hate you. You are left handed, your name starts with the forbidden letter at the start!”, The Nun cried.

“YOU ARE NO MORE THE PERSON YOU WERE BEFORE YOU ARE TO BE GONE BY DAWN!”, The Nun shouts nodding to some people I was grabbed (AGAiN?) and pushed out roughly
“BEGONE!” they say in unison The turn and ran leaving me staring down the corridor not knowing what to do.

“OH Lily what am I to do!?”, I cry falling dramatically onto the bed Lily shook her head
“WE what are WE going to do?”, Lily giggled
“oh yeah, at least we got each other”, I laugh grabbing some more old and dusty clothing  

“OH LOOK I AM THE NUNS CHiLD Keira!”, I mock strutting forward like Keira does  Lily laughed uncontrollably.
“WHAT'S SO FUNNY?”, someone shouted Lily and I looked at each other panic stricken it was Keira!
“I SAiD WHAT'S SO FUNNY!?”, Keira cried saying it louder I had to act fast and quick otherwise we would be in DANGER!
“L-L-Lily was sle-slee-sleep laughing” I Stammer thought the sentence
“REALLY?”, Keira asks “WELL! NO SLEEPiNG BECAUSE YOU WiLL BE ABLE TO SLEEP ONCE YOU LEAVE!” Keira shouts madly but leaves all the same.  

Lily looks at me
“Thanks!” She whispers scared that Keira was still here I shake my head sadly.
“Let's leave now!” I shout to let everyone know. Around the orphanage The girls whispers of Lily & Lilac leaving. inside of the Nuns office The Nun cursed:
“HOW DARE SHE LET THEM GiRLS KNOW!” Lily smiled and nodded
“LET’S GO Lilac!” She shouts louder than me I smile and head out but before we got out the door Keira jumps out and whistles. I turn my head for a moment because I thought that I had heard something, but with that split second I was grabbed and pulled into an unknown location (it must be in the orphanage) I open my eyes and spot Lily struggling against the two mysterious people
“LET HER GO!!!!!!” I shout before everything went black.  
“Where am I?” Was the first thing that I heard “SHHH!” Came an urgent reply“Keira?” I ask “YES?” sighed Keira “what are we doing here?” I as trying to be modest before Keira could say anything The Nun came striding in.
“WELL, WELL, WELL, What do we have here?” Laughed the Nun (a very happy/pleased with herself laugh) “Look at them especially Lilac!” Cried Keira I look down at myself I didn’t look as bedraggled as usual: My old clothes hung loosely (because we get hand me downs hmd for short) my bare feet were scratched and badly beaten bruises run down my slim model-like body.
“DO YOU NEED A MiRROR?” Mocked Keira but gave me one all the same I look down into the mirror stifling a gasp (I had never seen my face or my hair color) My eyes were a really deep purple I had few freckles and my hair was a deep purple and the closer to the end it got it turned slowly into a blondish colour all that ruined the effect was the clothes they were a dull gray with ripped seems (that I had tried to fix) cuts started at the shoulders and made their way down.

I looked over at Lily I had never studied her close but now when I looked at her she was dIfferent I explain how she looked: Her hair was a blue Lily color getting darker as it went down her face had few freckles (as mine had) her clothes were in a more ‘good’ condition fitting her well projecting a slim-model-like body, like me she had cuts & bruises scattered round her body. I continue staring at her transfixed by her beauty that was before the punishments happened I was grabbed and taken to a room FULL of things “Your first punishment is... HAViNG TO REWRiTE ALL OF THESE BOOKS!”, Cried Keira pointing to a thick pile of books I groaned Keira smiled and whispered something to the Nun “Gag them!” The nun said playfully the hidden men did as they were told as if they were scared.

ONE WHOLE YEAR Later! Tears were streaming down my face as the men did as they were told and ate right in front of us! iT WAS TORTURE!!! (we had been starved for 1-2 days) This had been going on for one year now with the same old gag that was put in at the start my bruises had faded but new ones had replaced them. The Nun appeared from the shadows (she was the one who pulled out stuff that is cut into us) she approached me, her cheeks were tear stained but all the same she RiPPED the gag off quickly making it sting (the ends of my mouth), tears came pouring out (HOW DiD i have that many!?) i looked down to see my hands shaking. I needed to scream BUT how? (I have forgotten how to talk)

The next day someone came striding in leaving the door WiDE open which made the sun leak into the room and made Lily and I blink a couple of times the strange man turned and looked at us
“Why are they here?”, he asked turning towards the nun
“Well…. Ummmm THe are the two left hand girls I told you about!”, The nun stammered, “why are they here than running on the streets?” he asked turning to study us “they let everyone know that they were leaving!”, The nun said gaining more confidence “And THe one with the purple hair is Lilac or known as The Punishment Girl for all the punishments she has. and the one next to her is Lily no good name for that one!”, The nun had continued. “Can they walk?”, he said “of course!”, the nun lied “NOW get up!”, she commanded. Lily slowly stood up but before she could take a step, she collapsed in pain. I tried. But I only did a few steps before I collapsed in pain as well.  
“OH NO THIS WILL NOT DO!” cried the stranger “THESE GIRLS
ARE NOW MINE! I WILL….. ADOPT THEM!” he shouted with joy
“Really mister?” questioned Lily looking up at the finely dressed man  
“YES! And no BUTS about it” he smiled turning to the nun “I will have these girls please! They are PERFECT!” he said rolling his r on perfect.
“NO NO NO THIS IS NOT ALLOWED!” cried the nun regaining her usual self “it is against the law is it not?” she continued  desperate to continue our punishments.
“NO mam if you check the new laws they have accepted the left handed people! OKay” he cried Lilac heard the lie but luckily the nun did not realize!





Saturday 12 November 2016

The Punishment Girl FIXED!

The Punishment Girl.

As I stumble stumble down the musty corridor girls of all ages cower away from me; as if I was a disease! I sigh but walk on ‘what is it with me?’ I wonder ‘they all run away from me. it's not fair!’ I continue to think what is wrong with me? Who am i?’ I wonder for the onethousandout time, all my daydreaming was interrupted when I bumped into the ‘special’ who kept us in order (really!?)
“THERE YOU ARE!”, cried Keira “THE NUN WANTS TO SEE YOU!”, she shouts as if every one has to know. I stare into her bulging blue eyes
“FiNE”, I shout loudly but not too loud otherwise I will be in BiG trouble.

I turned and walked away but before I got that far I was grabbed and hauled towards the Nun…
“You’ll be wondering why I want to talk to you”, the Nun calmly says, “Well that is because you are the forbidden one!”, I looked up and saw her cool gaze turn into glee.
“BB-BUT I am right handed and M-M-My name is Violet!”, I cry not taking this all in.
“Lilac look around you, girls cower away from you, people hate you. You are left handed, your name starts with the forbidden letter at the start!”, The Nun cried.

“YOU ARE NO MORE THE PERSON YOU WERE BEFORE YOU ARE TO BE GONE BY DAWN!”, The Nun shouts nodding to some people I was grabbed (AGAiN?) and pushed out roughly
“BEGONE!” they say in unison The turn and ran leaving me staring down the corridor not knowing what to do.

“OH Lily what am I to do!?”, I cry falling dramatically onto the bed Lily shook her head
“WE what are WE going to do?”, Lily giggled
“oh yeah, at least we got each other”, I laugh grabbing some more old and dusty clothing  

“OH LOOK I AM THE NUNS CHiLD Keira!”, I mock strutting forward like Keira does  Lily laughed uncontrollably.
“WHAT'S SO FUNNY?”, someone shouted Lily and I looked at each other panic stricken it was Keira!
“I SAiD WHAT'S SO FUNNY!?”, Keira cried saying it louder I had to act fast and quick otherwise we would be in DANGER!
“L-L-Lily was sle-slee-sleep laughing” I Stammer thought the sentence
“REALLY?”, Keira asks “WELL! NO SLEEPiNG BECAUSE YOU WiLL BE ABLE TO SLEEP ONCE YOU LEAVE!” Keira shouts madly but leaves all the same.  

Lily looks at me
“Thanks!” She whispers scared that Keira was still here I shake my head sadly.
“Let's leave now!” I shout to let everyone know. Around the orphanage The girls whispers of Lily & Lilac leaving. inside of the Nuns office The Nun cursed:
“HOW DARE SHE LET THEM GiRLS KNOW!” Lily smiled and nodded
“LET’S GO Lilac!” She shouts louder than me I smile and head out but before we got out the door Keira jumps out and whistles. I turn my head for a moment because I thought that I had heard something, but with that split second I was grabbed and pulled into an unknown location (it must be in the orphanage) I open my eyes and spot Lily struggling against the two mysterious people
“LET HER GO!!!!!!” I shout before everything went black.  
“Where am I?” Was the first thing that I heard “SHHH!” Came an urgent reply“Keira?” I ask “YES?” sighed Keira “what are we doing here?” I as trying to be modest before Keira could say anything The Nun came striding in.
“WELL, WELL, WELL, What do we have here?” Laughed the Nun (a very happy/pleased with herself laugh) “Look at them especially Lilac!” Cried Keira I look down at myself I didn’t look as bedraggled as usual: My old clothes hung loosely (because we get hand me downs hmd for short) my bare feet were scratched and badly beaten bruises run down my slim model-like body.
“DO YOU NEED A MiRROR?” Mocked Keira but gave me one all the same I look down into the mirror stifling a gasp (I had never seen my face or my hair color) My eyes were a really deep purple I had few freckles and my hair was a deep purple and the closer to the end it got it turned slowly into a blondish colour all that ruined the effect was the clothes they were a dull gray with ripped seems (that I had tried to fix) cuts started at the shoulders and made their way down.

I looked over at Lily I had never studied her close but now when I looked at her she was dIfferent I explain how she looked: Her hair was a blue Lily color getting darker as it went down her face had few freckles (as mine had) her clothes were in a more ‘good’ condition fitting her well projecting a slim-model-like body, like me she had cuts & bruises scattered round her body. I continue staring at her transfixed by her beauty that was before the punishments happened I was grabbed and taken to a room FULL of things “Your first punishment is... HAViNG TO REWRiTE ALL OF THESE BOOKS!”, Cried Keira pointing to a thick pile of books I groaned Keira smiled and whispered something to the Nun “Gag them!” The nun said playfully the hidden men did as they were told as if they were scared.

ONE WHOLE YEAR Later! Tears were streaming down my face as the men did as they were told and ate right in front of us! iT WAS TORTURE!!! (we had been starved for 1-2 days) This had been going on for one year now with the same old gag that was put in at the start my bruises had faded but new ones had replaced them. The Nun appeared from the shadows (she was the one who pulled out stuff that is cut into us) she approached me, her cheeks were tear stained but all the same she RiPPED the gag off quickly making it sting (the ends of my mouth), tears came pouring out (HOW DiD i have that many!?) i looked down to see my hands shaking. I needed to scream BUT how? (I have forgotten how to talk)

The next day someone came striding in leaving the door WiDE open which made the sun leak into the room and made Lily and I blink a couple of times the strange man turned and looked at us
“Why are they here?”, he asked turning towards the nun
“Well…. Ummmm THe are the two left hand girls I told you about!”, The nun stammered, “why are they rather the running on the streets?” he asked turning to study us “they let everyone know that they were leaving!”, The nun said gaining more confidence “And THe one with the purple hair is Lilac or known as The Punishment Girl for all the punishments she has. and the one next to her is Lily no good name for that one!”, The nun had continued. “Can they walk?”, he said “of course!”, the nun lied “NOW get up!”, she commanded. Lily slowly stood up but before she could take a step, she collapsed in pain. I tried. But I only did a few steps before I collapsed in pain as well.  
   





Sunday 30 October 2016

IS IT THAT MORBID?

The Punishment Girl.

As I stumble stumble down the musty corridor girls of all ages cower away from me; as if I was a disease! I sigh but walk on ‘what is it with me?’ i wonder ‘they all run away from me. It's not fair!’ I continue to think “what is wrong with me? Who am I?’ I wonder for the onethousandout time, all my daydreaming was interrupted when I bumped into the ‘special’ who kept us in order (really!?)
“THERE YOU ARE!”, cried Keira “THE NUN WANTS TO SEE YOU!”, she shouts as if every one has to know. I stare into her bulging blue eyes
“FINE”, I shout loudly but not too loud otherwise I will be in BIG trouble.

I turned and walked away but befor I got that far I grabbed and hauled towards the Nun…
“You’ll be wondering why i want to talk to you”, the Nun calmly says, “well that is because you are the forbidden one!”, I looked up and saw her cool gaze turn into glee.
“BB-BUT I am right handed and M-M-My name is Violet!”, I cry not taking this all in.
“Lilac look around you girls cower away from you, people hate you. You are left handed, your name starts with the forbidden letter at the start!”, The Nun cried.

“YOU ARE NO MORE THE PERSON YOU WERE BEFORE YOU ARE TO BE GONE BY DAWN!”, The Nun shouts nodding to some people I was grabbed (AGAIN?) and pushed out roughly
“BEGONE!” they say in unison The turn and ran leaving me staring down the corridor not knowing what to do.

“OH Lily what am I to do!?”, I cry falling dramatically onto the bed lily shook her head
“WE what are WE going to do?”, Lily giggled
“oh yeah, at least we got each other”, I laugh grabbing some more old and dusty clothing  

“OH LOOK I AM THE NUNS CHILD Keira!”, I mock strutting forward like Keira does  Lily laughed uncontrollably.
“WHAT'S SO FUNNY?”, someone shouted Lily and I looked at each other panic stricken it was Keira!
“I SAID WHAT'S SO FUNNY!?”, Keira cried saying it louder I had to act fast and quick otherwise we would be in DANGER!
“L-L-Lily was sle-slee-sleep laughing” I Stammer thought the sentence
“REALLY?”, Keira asks “WELL! NO SLEEPING BECAUSE YOU WILL BE ABLE TO SLEEP ONCE YOU LEAVE!” Keira shouts madly but leaves all the same.  

Lily looks at me
“Thanks!” She whispers scared that Keira was still here I shake my head sadly.
“Let's leave now!” I shout to let everyone know. Around the orphanage The girls whispers of Lily & Lilac leaving. Inside of the Nuns office The Nun cursed:
“HOW DARE SHE LET THEM GIRLS KNOW!” Lily smiled and nodded
“LET’S GO Lilac!” She shouts louder than me I smile and head out but before we got out the door Keira jumps out and whistles. I turn my head for a moment because I thought that I had heard something, but with that split second i was grabbed and pulled into an unknown location (it must be in the orphanage) I open my eyes and spot Lily struggling against the two mysterious people
“LET HER GO!!!!!!” I shout before everything went black.  
“Where am I?” Was the first thing that I heard “SHHH!” Came an urgent reply“Keira?” I ask “YES?” sighed Keira “what are we doing here?” I as trying to be modest before Keira could say anything The Nun came striding in.
“WELL, WELL, WELL, What do we have here?” Laughed the Nun (a very happy/pleased with herself laugh) “Look at them especially Lilac!” Cried Keira I look down at myself I didn’t look as bedraggled as usual: My old clothes hung loosely (because we get hand me downs hmd for short) my bare feet were scratched and badly beaten bruises run down my slim model-like body.
“DO YOU NEED A MIRROR?” Mocked Keira but gave me one all the same I look down into the mirror stifling a gasp (I had never seen my face or my hair color) My eyes were a really deep purple I had few freckles and my hair was a deep purple and the closer to the end it got it turned slowly into a blondish colour all that ruined the effect was the clothes they were a dull gray with ripped seems (that i had tried to fix) cuts started at the shoulders and made their way down.

I looked over at lily I had never studied her close but now when I looked at her she was different I explain how she looked: Her hair was a blue lily color getting darker as it went down her face had few freckles (as mine had) her clothes were in a more ‘good’ condition fitting her well projecting a slim-model-like body, like me she had cuts & bruises scattered round her body. I continue staring at her transfixed by her beauty that was before the punishments happened I was grabbed and taken to a room FULL of things “Your first punishment is... HAVING TO REWRITE ALL OF THESE BOOKS!” Cried Keira pointing to a thick pile of books I groaned Keira smiled and whispered something to the Nun “Gag them!” The nun said playfully the hidden men did as they were told as if they were scared.

ONE WHOLE YEAR Later! Tears were streaming down my face as a sharp bone knife was chopping into my skin unable to scream was torture they stopped and moved to Lily (The bone knife was still in my skin) I could just turn my head and see Lily shrink back in her seat I watch pained as the slowly and purposely cut into her fragile flesh… This had been going on for one year now with the same old gag that was put in at the start my bruises had faded but new ones had replaced them. The Nun appeared from the shadows (she was the one who pulled out stuff that is cut into us) she approached me, her cheeks were tear stained but all the same she RIPPED the bone knife out quickly making it sting more tears came pouring out (HOW DID I have that many!?) I looked down to see my blood gushing out. I needed to scream BUT how?





Wednesday 26 October 2016

Try out....

Hi everyone! I have some news for you! yes I have got some other blogs to show you and remember please comment otherwise I will have trouble knowing what you like and dislike...

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2:http://doiwanttosaythis.blogspot.co.nz/
that is all for now!
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See ya soon! 

Tuesday 25 October 2016

FEEL FREE!


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The Punishment Girl

A WORK IN PROGRESS!


The Punishment Girl.

As I stumble stumble down the musty corridor girls of all ages cower away from me; as if I was a disease! I sigh but walk on ‘what is it with me?’ i wonder ‘they all run away from me. It's not fair!’ I continue to think “what is wrong with me? Who am I?’ I wonder for the onethousandout time all my daydreaming was interrupted when i bumped into the ‘special’ who kept us in order (really!?)
“THERE YOU ARE!”, cried Keira “THE NUN WANTS TO SEE YOU!”, she shouts as if every one has to know. I stare into her eyes
“FINE”, I shout loudly but not too loud otherwise I will be in BIG trouble.

I turned and walked away but befor I got that far I grabbed and hauled towards the Nun…
“You’ll be wondering why i want to talk to you”, the Nun calmly says, “well that is because you are the forbidden one!”, I looked up and saw her cool gaze turn into glee.
“BB-BUT I am right handed and M-M-My name is Violet!”, I cry not taking this all in.
“lilith look around you girls cower away from you, people hate you. You are left handed, your name starts with the forbidden letter at the start!”, The Nun cried.

“YOU ARE NO MORE THE PERSON YOU WERE BEFORE YOU ARE TO BE GONE BY DAWN!”, The Nun shouts nodding to some people I was grabbed (AGAIN?) and pushed out roughly
“BEGONE!” they say in unison The turn and ran leaving me staring down the corridor not knowing what to do.

“OH Lily what am I to do!?”, I cry falling dramatically onto the bed lily shook her head
“WE what are WE going to do?”, Lily giggled
“oh yeah, at least we got each other”, I laugh grabbing some more old and dusty clothing  

“OH LOOK I AM THE NUNS CHILD Keira!”, I mock strutting forward like Keira does  Lily laughed uncontrollably.
“WHAT'S SO FUNNY?”, someone shouted Lily and I looked at each other panic stricken it was Keira!
“I SAID WHAT'S SO FUNNY!?”, Keira cried saying it louder I had to act fast and quick otherwise we would be in DANGER!
“L-L-Lily was sle-slee-sleep laughing” I Stammer thought the sentence
“REALLY?”, Keira asks “WELL! NO SLEEPING BECAUSE YOU WILL BE ABLE TO SLEEP ONCE YOU LEAVE!” Keira shouts madly but leaves all the same.  

Lily looks at me
“Thanks!” She whispers scared that Keira was still here I shake my head sadly.
“Let's leave now!” I shout to let everyone know. Around the orphanage The girls whisper that Lily & Lilith are now leaving...






(more soon Give me ides of story's as well)

Friday 18 March 2016

The mystery of the missing girl



Hey guys this is a story that I have been working on for a while and I am still working on it I will update it regularly so you can read to find out for yourself what is happening


The mystery of the missing girl
underlined = main characters
character names:
Olivia
Scarlet
Dawn
Eve
Sunset
Alex
Jeffery
Alexander
Robbie (Reb)
Winston

A beautiful girl stands in the blazing sun her golden blonde hair flying around in the soft breeze. Smiling as she dances around happily she had been freed from a mean scary story book but that was a different story.  
“Come here my darling” a voice crocks from the deep, dark shadows  
“Where are you?” the girl asks sweetly no one replied
“oh” was all that she could muster.  She turned around because she thought she heard a noise but no one was there… ‘hmmm’ the girl thought hard
“who cares” she says to herself. Soft hands close over the girl's mouth before she could scream another person tied her arms and legs together and gagged so they did not have to hold her mouth. The girl searches everywhere looking for what she could use to escape but it was no use they had got her. Tears ran down her face she was going to be a captive of these strange people as she tries to get rid of the gag she made a noise
“mMmM-” “stop it!” a man's voice yelled “should  ..,.. put ..,.. out ..,.. on her” a young looking man grumbles and going so quiet that only the men could hear.  
“yes” says an cranky looking man “MmMmM!” she tries to stop them but she was as helpless as a fly stuck in a fly net her gag was untied and then they gave her a strange looking drink so she drank it and all of a sudden everything went black.
“We have to find her” Eve cries “she is my sister!” she continues,
“It’s okay, we will find her” olivia says her voice so calming she could probably have a sparrow calmed down and hop onto her.
“Where did we see her last?” asks scarlet,
“on the hill where you Eve, and your sister rise the moon and make it day” Says an incredibly handsome boy called Robbie but nick named Reb
“ahhh that place I love that place so claiming” says Alex walking into the room just the right moment
“Alex!” Olivia cries “you made it!”
“of course!” Alex says doing a cheesy grin olivia swatted him but still giggled, Robbie rolled his eyes
“I thought we were talking about Eve's sister!” a cute looking boy says all their heads turn his way
“WHO ARE YOU!?” Alexander demands
“me?” sneers the boy “I am Jeffery” he smiled a charming smile
“I saw her being kidnapped by some people but I do not know who they were, BUT I know that they wanted to get her and I suppose that they will want little Evie here” he says looking down at Eve.
“I AM NOT LITTLE LET ALONE EVIE!!! I AM EVE!!!” Eve shouts at him
“okay fine by me” Jeffery says.
“what happened?” whispered the girl she had just woken up “She's up” a man says
“Really? I just wanted to live my life since she's sleepin’ my” Why do I do this one” he gets a green glass and gives it to her and she drinks it all “why did you have to make me the one in charge of the GIRL” he says putting the gag back on “she is like the worst one, oh and what is her name anyway?” The man says finally stopping then he rips off the gag again and asks her in a very mean voice before she falls asleep “what is your name!!!?” he yelled at her,
“my name is Dawn” she whispered so quietly they could only just hear
“thank you” he says pleased that he got her to say her name.
All day the friends tried to figure out a plan so they could find her “I say” calls out Alexander
“I say that this is officially a mystery of the- no OUR missing girl”
“Your  right” Jeffrey laughs “well we better protect our Eve, or what will we do?” for once he was right so they welcomed him into the team.
“Right we need to figure out this mystery before it is too late who knows what those people will do to her” everyone agrees with Alex then everyone pauses looking at each other what were they going to do!
“so..” Scarlet whispers weakly just to break the awkward silence.
“Oh no!” someone cries
“Oh yes” said a rough looking man Dawn looks up and saw the same boy that had freed her from her trap in the story. she had not got his name last time
“I don’t want to do this” the boy cries rocking back on his heels
“WELL TELL HER YOU NAME” says the mean man
“FINE” he cries but quickly got rid of the tears.
“I am winston” the boy says “and I am going to tell you why w-no I mean YOU are here” he stammers quickly correcting himself
“Did you know” he started “That you have a third sister?” winston did not stop for her to talk
“and she is right here with us and soon we will get your last sister eve.” he tried to spit the last word out so he sounded like one of them. The man gave winston a look as if to say ‘come on RIP off the gag so she can blab all of her secrets to us. winston nodded and carefully took off the gag.
“WHAT DO YOU MEAN I HAVE A THIRD SISTER!?” she yelled at them, the man looked startled not clearly expecting that as an answer.
“I WILL YELL BUT NEVER TELL ANY OF MY SECRETS!” she continued the man started to look frightened can she really read people's minds he wondered?
“AND I KNOW WHAT YOU ARE THINKING YOU ARE THINKING THAT I CAN REALLY READ PEOPLE'S MIND!” she smiled triumphantly as he stumbled out of the room and him shouting  out behind him
“Hey Winston you can look after Dawn by yourself” his voice fading as he disappeared down the long corridor
“WOW” Winston was surprised.
It had been five weeks since Dawn had went missing and all of the teenagers had not come up with a single Idea
“what about we.. oh that won’t work” miserable as they were they helped eve with raising the sun and raising the moon. by supporting her so she could be strong enough. to keep going once more they had a meeting.
“This has gone too long!” sniffs Jeffrey “I really want to see what she looks like” he continues.   
“I can not think of anything” Cries Eve
“CALM DOwN EVE!” Everyone cries with fear.
“I am trying to” Sniffs Eve all of a sudden Robbie cried out
“I HAVE AN IDEA!!!”
“What is is?” Eve asks perking up if this one works she thought we would be happy again.
“Well come on! Spit it out” She says excitedly
“Ok so here's the plan…”
“A sister I have another sister!” Dawn had been going on for ages
“Will you cut it out!” pleads winston he continues “I have to now show you her” Wiston got up and grabbed some chains. Those chain were special These chains would drain out Dawns power and make her helpless and weak winston knew she needed her power to survive he looked for stuff he could use instead and saw some normal chains they looked the same good he thought and chained the normal chains onto her and hid the special chains He whispered to her his plan Dawn noded and walked along with him sometimes acting like she did not want to go
“COME ON” he yelled at her pretending to get mad at her but secretly not mad.
“We are here” he says he walked up to the door and unlocked it out came a pretty girl with the longest hair Dawn could ever imagine and the girl's hair was a beautiful auburn  colour.
“Wh-o are-e y-you” Dawn finally manages to whisper
“Me?” The girl laughs shakily “I am Sunset” than all of a sudden she collapsed
“What happened?” Dawn asks winston but winston was not there he strode to the master's office and asked if he could look after both the girls in the same room. The man was delighted and said yes.
All day Eve fretted over her sister “Is she dead!?” She would always say every hour or so.

Back where dawn was wiston came back and took both of the girls to where dawn’s prison cell was