Friday 18 March 2016

The mystery of the missing girl



Hey guys this is a story that I have been working on for a while and I am still working on it I will update it regularly so you can read to find out for yourself what is happening


The mystery of the missing girl
underlined = main characters
character names:
Olivia
Scarlet
Dawn
Eve
Sunset
Alex
Jeffery
Alexander
Robbie (Reb)
Winston

A beautiful girl stands in the blazing sun her golden blonde hair flying around in the soft breeze. Smiling as she dances around happily she had been freed from a mean scary story book but that was a different story.  
“Come here my darling” a voice crocks from the deep, dark shadows  
“Where are you?” the girl asks sweetly no one replied
“oh” was all that she could muster.  She turned around because she thought she heard a noise but no one was there… ‘hmmm’ the girl thought hard
“who cares” she says to herself. Soft hands close over the girl's mouth before she could scream another person tied her arms and legs together and gagged so they did not have to hold her mouth. The girl searches everywhere looking for what she could use to escape but it was no use they had got her. Tears ran down her face she was going to be a captive of these strange people as she tries to get rid of the gag she made a noise
“mMmM-” “stop it!” a man's voice yelled “should  ..,.. put ..,.. out ..,.. on her” a young looking man grumbles and going so quiet that only the men could hear.  
“yes” says an cranky looking man “MmMmM!” she tries to stop them but she was as helpless as a fly stuck in a fly net her gag was untied and then they gave her a strange looking drink so she drank it and all of a sudden everything went black.
“We have to find her” Eve cries “she is my sister!” she continues,
“It’s okay, we will find her” olivia says her voice so calming she could probably have a sparrow calmed down and hop onto her.
“Where did we see her last?” asks scarlet,
“on the hill where you Eve, and your sister rise the moon and make it day” Says an incredibly handsome boy called Robbie but nick named Reb
“ahhh that place I love that place so claiming” says Alex walking into the room just the right moment
“Alex!” Olivia cries “you made it!”
“of course!” Alex says doing a cheesy grin olivia swatted him but still giggled, Robbie rolled his eyes
“I thought we were talking about Eve's sister!” a cute looking boy says all their heads turn his way
“WHO ARE YOU!?” Alexander demands
“me?” sneers the boy “I am Jeffery” he smiled a charming smile
“I saw her being kidnapped by some people but I do not know who they were, BUT I know that they wanted to get her and I suppose that they will want little Evie here” he says looking down at Eve.
“I AM NOT LITTLE LET ALONE EVIE!!! I AM EVE!!!” Eve shouts at him
“okay fine by me” Jeffery says.
“what happened?” whispered the girl she had just woken up “She's up” a man says
“Really? I just wanted to live my life since she's sleepin’ my” Why do I do this one” he gets a green glass and gives it to her and she drinks it all “why did you have to make me the one in charge of the GIRL” he says putting the gag back on “she is like the worst one, oh and what is her name anyway?” The man says finally stopping then he rips off the gag again and asks her in a very mean voice before she falls asleep “what is your name!!!?” he yelled at her,
“my name is Dawn” she whispered so quietly they could only just hear
“thank you” he says pleased that he got her to say her name.
All day the friends tried to figure out a plan so they could find her “I say” calls out Alexander
“I say that this is officially a mystery of the- no OUR missing girl”
“Your  right” Jeffrey laughs “well we better protect our Eve, or what will we do?” for once he was right so they welcomed him into the team.
“Right we need to figure out this mystery before it is too late who knows what those people will do to her” everyone agrees with Alex then everyone pauses looking at each other what were they going to do!
“so..” Scarlet whispers weakly just to break the awkward silence.
“Oh no!” someone cries
“Oh yes” said a rough looking man Dawn looks up and saw the same boy that had freed her from her trap in the story. she had not got his name last time
“I don’t want to do this” the boy cries rocking back on his heels
“WELL TELL HER YOU NAME” says the mean man
“FINE” he cries but quickly got rid of the tears.
“I am winston” the boy says “and I am going to tell you why w-no I mean YOU are here” he stammers quickly correcting himself
“Did you know” he started “That you have a third sister?” winston did not stop for her to talk
“and she is right here with us and soon we will get your last sister eve.” he tried to spit the last word out so he sounded like one of them. The man gave winston a look as if to say ‘come on RIP off the gag so she can blab all of her secrets to us. winston nodded and carefully took off the gag.
“WHAT DO YOU MEAN I HAVE A THIRD SISTER!?” she yelled at them, the man looked startled not clearly expecting that as an answer.
“I WILL YELL BUT NEVER TELL ANY OF MY SECRETS!” she continued the man started to look frightened can she really read people's minds he wondered?
“AND I KNOW WHAT YOU ARE THINKING YOU ARE THINKING THAT I CAN REALLY READ PEOPLE'S MIND!” she smiled triumphantly as he stumbled out of the room and him shouting  out behind him
“Hey Winston you can look after Dawn by yourself” his voice fading as he disappeared down the long corridor
“WOW” Winston was surprised.
It had been five weeks since Dawn had went missing and all of the teenagers had not come up with a single Idea
“what about we.. oh that won’t work” miserable as they were they helped eve with raising the sun and raising the moon. by supporting her so she could be strong enough. to keep going once more they had a meeting.
“This has gone too long!” sniffs Jeffrey “I really want to see what she looks like” he continues.   
“I can not think of anything” Cries Eve
“CALM DOwN EVE!” Everyone cries with fear.
“I am trying to” Sniffs Eve all of a sudden Robbie cried out
“I HAVE AN IDEA!!!”
“What is is?” Eve asks perking up if this one works she thought we would be happy again.
“Well come on! Spit it out” She says excitedly
“Ok so here's the plan…”
“A sister I have another sister!” Dawn had been going on for ages
“Will you cut it out!” pleads winston he continues “I have to now show you her” Wiston got up and grabbed some chains. Those chain were special These chains would drain out Dawns power and make her helpless and weak winston knew she needed her power to survive he looked for stuff he could use instead and saw some normal chains they looked the same good he thought and chained the normal chains onto her and hid the special chains He whispered to her his plan Dawn noded and walked along with him sometimes acting like she did not want to go
“COME ON” he yelled at her pretending to get mad at her but secretly not mad.
“We are here” he says he walked up to the door and unlocked it out came a pretty girl with the longest hair Dawn could ever imagine and the girl's hair was a beautiful auburn  colour.
“Wh-o are-e y-you” Dawn finally manages to whisper
“Me?” The girl laughs shakily “I am Sunset” than all of a sudden she collapsed
“What happened?” Dawn asks winston but winston was not there he strode to the master's office and asked if he could look after both the girls in the same room. The man was delighted and said yes.
All day Eve fretted over her sister “Is she dead!?” She would always say every hour or so.

Back where dawn was wiston came back and took both of the girls to where dawn’s prison cell was